5 min movie ideas
jack the ripper was a very clever and carefull killer, he never left any traces of killing anybody. there was for instance this time where he met a blond lady in an alliway she was walking down to go the other side and jack the ripper was waiting on the other side waiting for the women to arrive and then to stabb her.
all the women could see was black gloves black jacket and nothing else. about 2 hours later 2 strong and tall men came to look for the lady who suddenly went missing. the 2 strong tall men coulden't find the women of cource and immediatly went to report this to the police. the police also went to look for the lady but also could not find the lady the police have also noticed that more and more women were getting killed so the police went around the area were all the killing was happening, the area was called the whitechapel district.
so what the police did was send out a search party to find out who is killing all these lady's what the jack the ripper actually did was find prostitutes and slit their throats prior to abdominal mutilations. the removal of the internal organs of the victim lady's suggest that the killer who has been dubbed as jack the ripper had anatomical and surgical knowledge. he obviously knew what to do with the organs or he sold them to doctors who trying to make new discoveries.
This is a much better idea for a film Hamza, I like the way you have thought about using the two hands for suspense reasons.
ReplyDeleteIt does all have to be your own words though; quite a bit of this is cut and pasted from your research.
You need to rewrite the treatment in your own words, then break it down into scenes, each with an individual scene heading. You can find the scene headings on my blogger post.