Thursday, 29 September 2011

my film

my film is called pirates of the Atlantic it is about a bunch of pirates that are looking for their treasure that they have left somewhere in an unvisited island but on the way they get into a lot of trouble  because alot of there other rival pirates also know where the island is that they have left the treasure in.the rival pirates had a really good idea about how they could trick the other pirates they visited the island where the treasure was but they deliberatly did not take out the treasure from under the ground they waited for the pirates to arrive and then they acted like normal people and they welcomed the pirates to the island

1 comment:

  1. This is a good start Hamza, remember to extend it to three paragraphs as asked.

    I am a little worried that a pirate movie might be difficult to film; you will have to find some good green screen footage or be inventive with props and costumes.

    Next you need to break your treatment into scenes, each with an individual scene heading. You can find the scene headings on my blogger post.

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