1  EXT IN ALLEWAY DAY
the girl that got kidnapped.
2 INT brother's house day
had a brother at home john who is worried his sister sarah is late coming home from ... so he decides to leave to look for her.
 3 EXT cathedral day
the brother went around looking for her together with the house maid who is also worried and wants to find the girl as soon as possible
4 ext the streets
the brother and the house maid went to the streets and they were looking for the girl but they coulden't find her so they gave up looking for her in the streets 
5 ext police station day
 they still couldent find her so they went to the police station and got the police involved, together with the police they were looking for her all round the city.
6 int brothers house again 
they give up and and they cant find her so they give up looking for her and the housemaid and the brother are very sad.
7  int brothers house
the brother and the housemaid are home and very sad but they get a letter the next day and they read it, the letter was from kidnappers that have kidnapped the girl.
8 int brothers house 
the brother and the housemaid receive a letter from the kidnappers of the girl and they receive a ransomthey are worried so they go the police station with the ransom.
9 ext back to the streets
together with the police they go the place where they police have traced down the place where they think the kidnappers are located.
10 int kidnappers location
they agree a fee because the brother belongs to a wealthy family.
11 int kidnappers location 
the brother and the house maid already knew that the kidnappers would not let her go so thy already had the money with them.

 1- EXT. ALLEYWAY. NIGHT 
THE BLOND LADY GETS KILLED BY A MISTERIOUS FIGURE IN A ALLEYWAY
 
there was for instance this time where he met a blond lady in an alliway she was walking down to go the other side and jack the ripper was waiting on the other side waiting for the women to arrive and then to stabb her.

all the women could see was black gloves black jacket and nothing else. about 2 hours later 2 strong and tall men came to look for the lady who suddenly went missing. the 2 strong tall men coulden't find the women of cource and immediatly went to report this to the police. the police also went to look for the lady but also could not find the lady the police have also noticed that more and more women were getting killed so the police went around the area were all the killing was happening, the area was called the whitechapel district.
so what the police did was send out a search party to find out who is killing all these lady's what the jack the ripper actually did was find prostitutes and slit their throats prior to abdominal mutilations. the removal of the internal organs of the victim lady's suggest that the killer who has been dubbed as jack the ripper had anatomical and surgical knowledge. he obviously knew what to do with the organs or he sold them to doctors who trying to make new discoveries.

has facebook made it easier to bully people

purpose:  first of all i know for a fact that lots of people are getting bullied through new technology which is called cyber bullying also the reason why i am making this video is to show how much people are getting bullied on facebook and how it can be prevented

i chose this because alot of people are getting bullied through this tool called facebook and it could also be called a crime because there are alot of people that kill themselves and commit suicide because of facebook.
pros                                                                                 cons
it is something that happens alot so it would                  it would be hard to get an expert to interview and
be easy to find out stuff about cyber bullying                 it would be hard to get examples of this.
on the web

primary research that i need to do:

• i need to find out facts about facebook cyber bullying.
• i need to find an example or someone that has experience and had it done to themselves.
• find out how many people in the country get cyber bullying through facebook. 

secondary research:

• need to find out about other peoples opinion about cyber bullying through facebook.
• how many are predictedly to be bullied through cyber bullying and facebook.
• i have to find out how often it happens through the internet or other peoples opinions.

how facebook made it easier to bully people

• proposal: we did this because it is a serious offence ans people kill themselves over this.
• we hope bullies see this to see what they actually do to the poor people that get bullied

• we chose this because we wanted to investigate what causes these bullies to do what they do.

layout of the script

it has a lot of detail it is saying what is around the area of the house so it is very descriptive
also it describes what the girl is like before she enters the house and they also say that the girl is like a boy and that she is not girly she acts more like a boy also the layout of the script is good because it shows exactly what rani and clyde are doing for example a grin or something this will help my own script and it will give me an idea about what my script should be like

primary research my opinion

what i know about cyber bullying is that it is affected by lots of people cyber bullying and also other ways of bullying i think this will affect the childrens confidence level and it would make people scared of certain people for example if a child gets bullied and tells an adult  about what has been happening to them the person that bullies them might threaten that he/she would do something about it.but unfortunately sometimes the bully is hard to catch for example a student that builds a webpage remains anonymous and it is likely that it will be hosted on a server on another state or even in another city. and the company's hosting the website don't remove things like that because they think that it is not their responsibility to delete things that other people have written and they don't think that they have the right to just say that something like that is really inappropriate.

secondary research HAT task

my  first secondary research person is called shaheen Sharif and this person is an expert on cyber bullying. she also has an PHD in cyber bullying. she thinks that cyber bullying is not a battle when it is currently defined. but more like a plea for improved and increased attention to education and dialogue. bonding and engagement with our young people that is one opinion from an expert on cyber bullying.

questions

• What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname?
• my character's full name is jack the ripper and his preferred nickname is the murderer 
• How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?
• my character is 24 years old and he was born in 1946.
• What is their date of birth?
• their date of birth is 17/11/1946.
• What is their place of birth?
• jack the ripper was born in london.
• Are they male or female?
• my character is male.
• Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
• he lives in london.
• Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many?
• yes my character had 2 brothers and 2 sisters.
• What is your character's overall health like?
• he is healthy.
• What type of personality does your character have?
• he has a bad personality he used to get angry really quickly because he had anger management problems and he also had a bad personality because he used to kill  alot of people.
• What is their Ethnic background and religion?
• he is english and he is an orthodox christian.
• What is their current occupation?
• he is a hired murderer.
• What level of education does your character have?
• he had a good education when he was younger but he dropped out of school at the age of 15
• What does your character like or love?
• he likes money because he gets hired to kill people.
• What does your character dislike or hate?
• my character hates prostitutes and he kills them whenever he sees them.

outline proposal

my topic is going to be about what is being done to stop cyber bullying. i personally think that not enough is being done to stop cyber bullying nearly 42% of kids have been bullied online and almost one in four have had it happened more than once. four out of ten of middle school children have had their passwords stolen and changed by a bully who then locked them out of their own account or sent communications posing at them. these facts are true and it is still happening today.  what i want to do is find out why cyber bullying is happening today and how to prevent it. what i would also try to do is interview someone that has been cyber bullied before and get more experience about the topic. what i would also do get a group of people to do a servey about cyber bullying and get them to write ways to stop cyber bullying. there is a disadvantage to this because it is hard to get someone with experience that spends his time to find out about cyber bullying and knows all the facts about cyber bullying

merlin review the wicked day

i watched about 15 minutes of merlin series 4 and i also read the script i learnd that EXT which is a scene that is being done outside and i also  learnd INT which means a scene that is being done inside.
then after the inside and outside scenes changed i looked back at the script and viewed the dialogue.
i also

progress so far

so far i have resarched my idea and developed an initial story.  have created a treatment that explains my story in three paragraphs but in order to perfect my idea further i must break it down even smaller so i can explain in more detail and give the audience a great insight into my story and understand what i am planning.
the next step in my idea is to further research into horror/comedy. i will be observing other clips from movies with a similar genre and i will take the best elements and combine it with my film in order to get the best results.

Unit 20- Mind map

jack the ripper

 5 min movie ideas
jack the ripper was a very clever and carefull killer, he never left any traces of killing anybody. there was for instance this time where he met a blond lady in an alliway she was walking down to go the other side and jack the ripper was waiting on the other side waiting for the women to arrive and then to stabb her.

all the women could see was black gloves black jacket and nothing else. about 2 hours later 2 strong and tall men came to look for the lady who suddenly went missing. the 2 strong tall men coulden't find the women of cource and immediatly went to report this to the police. the police also went to look for the lady but also could not find the lady the police have also noticed that more and more women were getting killed so the police went around the area were all the killing was happening, the area was called the whitechapel district.
so what the police did was send out a search party to find out who is killing all these lady's what the jack the ripper actually did was find prostitutes and slit their throats prior to abdominal mutilations. the removal of the internal organs of the victim lady's suggest that the killer who has been dubbed as jack the ripper had anatomical and surgical knowledge. he obviously knew what to do with the organs or he sold them to doctors who trying to make new discoveries.

my film

my film is called pirates of the Atlantic it is about a bunch of pirates that are looking for their treasure that they have left somewhere in an unvisited island but on the way they get into a lot of trouble  because alot of there other rival pirates also know where the island is that they have left the treasure in.the rival pirates had a really good idea about how they could trick the other pirates they visited the island where the treasure was but they deliberatly did not take out the treasure from under the ground they waited for the pirates to arrive and then they acted like normal people and they welcomed the pirates to the island

finding a story

 story- 

1. What is being done to stop cyber bullying. i have chosen cyber bullying because some people are being cyber bullied and nothing is being done to stop it or prevent it.
2. is four lions really funny or immature? i picked this as i have seen the movie i personaly think that some parts of the movie are funny and some are not this is also some of the things that i will be looking at.
3. does violent video games actually make people violent? i have picked this because in the news there was a man that was in the army and as a result of playing games he ended up shooting the general.
4. does celebrity life effect the way that teenagers live? i have picked this because i have seen lots of people around me in my life following after celebrity footsteps say a celebrity lady buys a new wheelchair and then everybody else copies it this is called brand edorsement 

types of documentary

expository documentry- a non-fiction film that emphasises verbal commentary and argumentative logic.


examples: an inconvenient truth is an example of an expository documenary because it relies on verbal commentary and argumentative logic to make its strong case for prevention of global warming.

observational documentary-the social actors free to act and the documentarist free to record without interacting with each other.
reflexive documentary-demonstrates on how reflexive documentary engages actively with the issues of realism and representation.
performativity documentary-acknowledges the emotional and subjective aspects of documentary,and presents ideas as part of a context,having different meanings for different people,often autobiographical in nature.
participatory document-activey engages with the situation they are documenting,asking questions of their subjects.