1  EXT ALLEYWAY NIGHT
A blonde pretty 16 year old girl called Sarah is walking down a dark alleyway. A dark figure creeps up on Sarah whilst she is walking through the alleyway the dark figure creeps up on her and puts a tissue over her mouth and he drags her off screen.

2 INT brother's house day
had a brother at home john who is worried his sister sarah is late coming home from ... so he decides to leave to look for her.
 john, sarah's brother is a 18 year old man, john lives in a mansion he is reading a book he is in a dark room and has a candlelight on. the housemaid is in the living room cleaning the the room the room she is in is well lit with lots of candles. the housemaid is looking worried. the housemaid asks John if he has seen Sarah.
the brother went around looking for her together with the house maid who is also worried and wants to find the girl as soon as possible.
john and the housemaid are in the cathedral entrance and they enter the cathedral
4 ext the streets
the brother and the house maid went to the streets and they were looking for the girl but they coulden't find her so they gave up looking for her in the streets 
5 ext police station day
 they still couldent find her so they went to the police station and got the police involved, together with the police they were looking for her all round the city.
6 int brothers house again 
they give up and and they cant find her so they give up looking for her and the housemaid and the brother are very sad.
7  int brothers house
the brother and the housemaid are home and very sad but they get a letter the next day and they read it, the letter was from kidnappers that have kidnapped the girl.
8 int brothers house 
the brother and the housemaid receive a letter from the kidnappers of the girl and they receive a ransomthey are worried so they go the police station with the ransom.
9 ext back to the streets
together with the police they go the place where they police have traced down the place where they think the kidnappers are located.
10 int kidnappers location
they agree a fee because the brother belongs to a wealthy family.
11 int kidnappers location 
the brother and the house maid already knew that the kidnappers would not let her go so thy already had the money with them.